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Thursday, March 20, 2014

Deep Blue- We're Not Alone... (Tell This Story Prompt)

The darkness of the sea has to be one of the most terrifying things about Mother Earth. The deepness and the inability to even guess when the true end will be found, when the bottom will be reached. But for some reason, Danny had to go deep. He knew there was something for him to see. And seeing as he had and undying body, he thought that water pressure was not contest to him. And when he began to sink deeper into the leagues beneath the surface, he proved he was right. But the darkness came soon, and with it a slight colder water. But soon enough, he got underneath the dark and was in a place of light. That’s when he got the eerie feeling that someone or something was surrounding him. He looked all around but couldn't shake the feeling- even though he was the only thing for as far as he could see. And then, he felt it- a arm wrapping around his body. He looked down to see a child. It had bright yellowish-gold eyes and a toothy fanged smile. She gave off the vibe of an innocent though, as if she had never used her dangerous attributes for harm. He ruffled the young child’s hair. She said to him “why are you so far up here, mister?” Danny was baffled. Not only by her ability to talk, but the fact that she had said “up here”. “What do you mean? I've come down darling” he said with a confused look upon his face. She stopped smiling. Her eyes went from yellow to white. "That's no good, mister. Outsiders have to deal with Smiley." Danny was thoroughly confused. That is, until he felt a dark and ominous presence... And that's when he turned to see a creature that was so big it blocked out the light. And that was just the first half of the creature. It just floated there, staring at him. Eyes white and unfeeling. It sniffed around, as if it wasn't sure what to do. And that's when Danny realized why; the girl was still there. It doesn't attack her kind, Danny thought. But as soon as he realized that, she opened her mouth to show a mouth that rivaled a shark. Danny tried to move back, but she grabbed his arm and bit into it hard. His blood began to spill out into the open water profusely. That's when the creature locked dead onto him. It let out the loudest roar that seemed to shake all the water around them. As the blood left Danny, the creature went upward, showing just how long it truly was. Danny watched it go high, but it's body still not reaching the tail. And as it began to come down, the little girl floated away. Danny looked to see her, eyes in full yellow glow, smiling at him with a wide toothy smile. As he stared into the face of his only glimpse into a new world, he was swallowed whole.

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